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A Promise



when down and out,
I'll help you up and get you back in the race.

when sad and alone,
I'll come over and make you laugh.

when hrut,
I'll make it better.

this might not matter to you,
but this is me,
true.

this is what I bring to the table,
and even if you forget it all...I won't.

Author notes

yeah, I know this is kinda short and simple for me and my type but its all good. I'll bring one you'll really like.

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  • Heroesrox
    December 14, 2008
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    Awesome write. I love it. Just as good as the others by you! Keep it up!


  • StarEyes
    August 27, 2008

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    Yes My dear grandson, this is simple, and yet wonderful! You did a great job on it, (minus one little typo) Sometimes simple is best, you know. You dont always have to be detailed to be profound.

    and love

    Grams