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Merry Christmas (early)

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Christmas came a few months early,
when this package was sent to me.
Wrapped with all my favorite trimmings,
tucked under my ficus tree.

The kind of gift a friend would send,
with a ribbon; but no bow.
The things that I could do with it,
you might not like to know.

Maybe I’ll tell you anyway,
just so you do turn red.
Then again you know me,
I’ll let you guess instead.

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If someone would like to get me something for Christmas this would be great. I would owe you big time. If you know me I might even be quiet, maybe. I tried to go ten lines but it messes up my rhyming then where would I be.

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  • Riftkin gold member
    September 24

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    With a ribbon of red or green, tied around the bod. Can you picture how your lady would be, sitting up under your holiday tree. With something special just for you, I think you know what we could do.

    Love to you, hun.

    Riftkin


  • daviscth silver member
    August 27, 2008

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    You did a great job with this picture. I just loved the imagery and the sense of humor. Thank you so much for posting.