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with a simple breathe

Breathe of healing love flows in  me
Breathing out the painful lonely agree
Spirits of kindness fill the eminence
Love so refreshing pure eloquence
Pure light flavoring the soul of me
Faith now moving: bless each breathe.

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  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    October 16, 2008
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    The light does indeed flow and breathe. A nicely done piece you've written here


  • Pisces rainbow gold member
    August 28, 2008

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    LOVELY MY FRIEND
    PURE LIGHT FLAVORING THE SOUL OF ME
    FAITH IS THE KEY, PURE FAITH IS POWERFUL
    IT CREATES THE LIGHT OF GOD
    EXQUISITE
    GOD BLESS...


  • superstition
    August 27, 2008

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    I really liked this cycle of life you were able to create for this poem - It's beautiful, and it's also easy to relate to in a number of ways. Love the main subjects in this write: Love, Light, Faith, Breathe. Excellent job.