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Colors (the Haiku)

It starts with yellow
The color that brings us hope
It shines like the sun

White is purity
Brought by the shining yellow
Always doomed to fall

Black covers the white
It corrupts purity's shine
Becoming its death

Then its crimson red
The blood spilled by purity
And all the others

Blue washes the blood
Destroying the evidense
Blotting out the sun

A contest entry

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  • echo-ink
    September 20, 2008

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    Good colorful Haiku.....pardon the pun,
    Thanks for entering, Bell


  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    September 5, 2008
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    Very nice indeed, I like the way you use a different haiku for each colour. Nicely done.

  • carole21
    September 4, 2008
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    good take on the prompt . . best of luck in the contest


  • Walk-Free
    September 3, 2008
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    enjoyed reading this poem

    well done indeed