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life happens to fast

once you get what you want, you cant have it
you wish there was one more week
but no, you have to leave and end it to soon
you don't have time to have fun
your life has to end and may not return
you have to grow up and stop all the childish games
there is no fun, there is no games
everything is so serious

when you get there everything seems so new and fresh
you like it at first
you are making new friends
but always missing the old ones
you try to have fun but there is nothing to do
you get in fights cuz your so home sick
theres so much homework
not enough time
classes are boring, the quite attempts to suffocate me

new friends leave for a couple days
no car to leave with them
stuck here with nothing to do
want to go home, but no way
everything just seems so lifeless
then you quite smoking
no stress reliever,
it all builds up, how do you make it stop?
this is the life that i didnt want

i am doing something with my life
not sitting at home
wasting away my brains
its what i want but in a different world
where all my friends can come too
where they can come here
do something with there brains
why does everything have to be so confusing
why does everything have to have its bads

leave one, find another.
i dont know if i want to find another just to know i left the other

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  • brittany.geeze
    November 9, 2008

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    you tell me that you dont ever get new things on here, well... FUCKIN WRITE SOME POETRY THEN BITCH! teeeeeehehehehehehehehehehehehehe.

    ~brittany!


  • xXxIceQueenxXx
    September 30, 2008
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    awwww!!!!! way to finish it! yay!

  • brittany.geeze
    September 24, 2008
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    awwww

    i dont know if i want to find another just to know i left the other


    that line is the amazing-ness of all the lines.

  • xXxIceQueenxXx
    September 1, 2008

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    yeah, hurry up and finish it! ahhhh life........such a bitch


    espeically college.


  • brittany.geeze
    August 27, 2008
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    well hurry up and finish it!!!

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