It is in the days of tears and blue skies
this men reaches out to dry my eyes
When love of man try to touch me with tainted hands
A clam within the wind, to cheer my soul in rhyme
A giggle he tells me he wishes to hear
and a child's voice to bring a smile from his voice
If there is but one thing I wish I could do
it would be to hug you and tell you it will be okay
He listens to the ramble of a young adult
still trying to find her place
Jeff I do love you and I thank you so
for being that voice of reason when I lose all hope
In a list
A contest entry
- Jeff's first year by cricketjeff.
4620 points, ended October 5, 2008, 64 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I can only thank-you for a beautiful entry, you are a wonderful friend and so often manage to cheer me up.
Good luck in the judging
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Beautiful. This is a loving and emotional piece that I can tell you wrote from the heart.
Keep up the good work and thanks for sharing =]
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Amazing.
A beautiful heart-felt tribute to a wonderful soul.
I'm sure he will truly cherish this poetic piece indeed.
Thanks for sharing from the heart, be blessed!
-Timothy aka poeticweaver
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nice tribute to your friend
joe
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