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Your Sweet Kiss

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Lips pressed together, lovers kiss,
bonded together heavenly bliss.
Lips quiver with sweet sensation,
seduction, surrender, anticipation.

Mouth to mouth, pressed, explored,
soft sweet sighs for those adored.
Becoming breathless gasp for air,
show of affection when we care.

French kissing as tongues mingle,
lost in the moment as senses tingle.
Kisses are felt from head to toe,
locked in embrace, feelings grow.

When in love, one is never enough,
being apart becomes oh so tough.
But that first kiss when you reunite,
makes everything feel oh so right.



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  • Terry Collett
    September 1, 2008
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    An excellent lyrical poem.

    This is an excellent poem,composed with that skill you have and sincerity,too.


    • Sandygram silver member
      September 5, 2008
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      Great Comment

      Hello Terry. Always nice to have you stop by. Thank you for reading and commenting. Take care,

      Sandy

  • Shadow Lynx
    August 30, 2008

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    Beautiful , simply beautiful Sandy Great rhyming, you have a golden pen best of luck


    • Sandygram silver member
      September 5, 2008
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      Lovely Coment

      Hello my friend. Thank you for this lovely coment. Always enjoy reading your thoughtful comments. Take care.

      Bless You,
      Sandy

  • punkbeauty
    August 29, 2008
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    Excellent tribute to what a kiss is...beautiful!~
    Nevadapoet

    • Sandygram silver member
      August 30, 2008
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      Thank you for the lovely coment. You take care, Sandy
  • Liquid memories
    August 28, 2008

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    Such feelings of passion in this write. Closing my eyes, I could recall the feelings of kissing. you are right, one is never, ever enough. Thank you for sharing this lovely poem.


    • Sandygram silver member
      August 28, 2008
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      Thank You Dear Friend!

      Your words are always so nice to read when you comment omn my poetry. Glad you enjoyed. Kisses are always sweet with the one we love. Hugs and Smiles!!!! Thank You.

      Bless You,
      Sandy

  • wildfiredreamer
    August 27, 2008

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    oh wow!!!!!!!!

    melt my heart, your words flow as wonderful as that first kiss when reunite. I love the way you describe it.
    a wonderful poem on one of my favorite things
    best to you in the contest

    Rhonda


    • Sandygram silver member
      August 28, 2008
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      Hello Rhonda

      Thank you so much for reading my poetry. Always nice when you stop by. Please take care.

      Bless You,
      Sand
  • chiefmac
    August 27, 2008

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    Great take on the prompt. Lovers tingle anticipate bliss all from just a kiss. Emotion delivers passion released, left breathless with each embrace.
    Rhyme is wonderfully followed through as the work moves forward tastefully erotic.


    • Sandygram silver member
      August 28, 2008
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      A Beautiful Comment

      Thank you Dan. So glad you enjoyed my poem. Thank you for stopping by and reading. Always brings a warm smile. Take care.

      Blessings to you and yours this lovely day!

      Take care, Sandy

  • Kappa Pyua
    August 27, 2008

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    Such passion in these words. One can feel and see the images very clear. Everyone hopes to have such a reunion. Thanks for sharing your passion. UNT

    • Sandygram silver member
      August 28, 2008
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      Lovely Coment

      Thank you for the lovely comment on my poem. It is most appreciated. You take care.

      Bless You,
      Sandy
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