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BlushingMoonLight

Playing with blades of grass
Kentucky blue, more teal green.
Winds were still; upon the hill
sweet sensation's prancing dreams.
Lost in beauty of pale blue skies
wondering if the world realized.

Waves of pleasure o'er our souls
leaving strong emotions to quiver.
Vibrations planted; lips slanted
explosive bodies, spirits shiver.
Entwined expectations locked in kiss
angelic beings sang heavenly bliss.

So be it! day's of wine, roses
stars whispered 'bout our love.
Candle lights; many sultry nights
ethereal earth's blushing moon above.
Our hearts joined in celestial flight
making all that's wrong turn right.

Author notes

just having wild thoughts while my puter is down....novy

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  • Angelflower
    September 1, 2008

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    Beautiful! I really loved the imagery in this write.. It was soft loving and so vivid!! you created such a beautiful story line here.. I really enjoyed reading.. Thank you very much for sharing..


    Angel


  • Ray Lacasse
    August 27, 2008

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    Love the Title

    The imagery you present is gripping and certainly appeals to my romantic side. The first two lines caught me.