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The Romper Room

 

 

 

 

 

The peace of the creche withered and died
as medicine was served and the baby cried
Defiant and angry, her dummy spat out,
the childling began to scream and shout.

 

 

Her eyes became puffy, her face ruby red,
this raucous commotion  very soon spread.
to the nearby cots where her friends laid
who soon joined in the rumpus she made.

 

 

The ruckus increased and rattles were thrown,
nurse just looked on, bemused by the tone.
She watched as they all screamed out and yelled,
the medicine dose in her hand, still  held.

 

 

the riot went on till their faces turned blue,
breath became shortened and tears ran anew,
for their cots were now void of rattles and toys,
when tantrums took over amongst all the noise.

 

 

nurse patiently awaited for calm to return,
such tantrums and tempers are no great concern
puffy eyed and still pink, tears finally slowed
now the medicine will at last be bestowed.

 

 

 

 

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  • Kari gold member
    March 29
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    aw so very cute


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    November 22, 2008

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    Hood Wink!

    Oh what a delightfully adorable poem this is!
    Brought forth a giggle and bright smile as I read; I admire the nurses in the maternity ward, they are so patient and gentle

    Love the background here as well!

    Stay safe
    ~Manda


  • tawk gold member
    November 21, 2008

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    Hood-Winked!

    Your wonderful poem brought back such memories to me. Such vivid and amazing imagery! Just beautiful I so enjoyed reading. Thanks for all you do for others, I hope you have an amazing weekend! Hugs Theresa

  • michaeline
    November 9, 2008

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    I loved the story and the rhyming was perfect.This flowed great all the way through.You made this easy to read and I love the title and the way the first and last lines read.


  • Whispering Wind Moderators member
    September 22, 2008
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    WONDERFUL

    And what a noise there was to be heard

    as the windows rattled

    are doors unhinged

     

    the liitle ones screamed

    and tears flowed

    toys thrown to and frow

     

    so goes a day

    in the nursery...

     

     

    This was such a wonderful read and the pictures you have painted on canvase of words made me chuckle indeed...

     

    Thank you sweet soul for sharing this with me

     

     

     


  • catz Moderators member
    September 3, 2008

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    And just about when I was able to put aside childish nightmares, along comes another reminder This is all too realistic, Ann. The perpetual nearly nonstop ruckus.

    I have a young cousin who recently gave birth to triplet girls... I wonder how she's holding up... I should send the link to this poem to her. They're just a month old so she should be up for some sympathetic comic relief

    It's good to see you posting these last couple of poems, Sis

    love and
    Dee


  • ProudMomma
    September 2, 2008

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    this was very cute!! I really liked this and kids throw horrible fits, my kids are the worst i swear but its all worth it with all the love that comes too!! great write!

  • Yvette Champ gold member
    September 2, 2008

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    Like the title, wondered whether the write was, in fact, metaphorical, for all those who are able to dine on being able to whine within the remit of the adult poetic playground of allpoetry lol

    The capitalization was perhapd misplaced here and there but that is not a criticism, simply a perspective proffered.

    As someone who has had loved one's on the SCBU and indeed heard such a hullabaloo the poem touched me, babies all make the same sounds, whatever their nationality...


    The pictures of the pacifiers reminds me of my own premise not to use such an item lol until my baby would not be pacified and I bought every type in production until I found one that would, albeit temporarily, placate her!!!


  • just mercedes gold member
    August 30, 2008

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    Lovely poem, strong imagery and lots of sound!

    Is it perhaps a metaphor for the work of Moderators in the pub? Read that way, it's even better.


    • symitar Moderators member
      August 31, 2008
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      or maybe just the rabble rousers in general? lol Very astute perception, grasshopper! lol


  • poetrandy
    August 30, 2008

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    Great new baby subject poem!

    This one was a lot of fun and enjoyable! have seen a poem about new babies lately! Great subject and ddevelopment! Fine choice of words and good flow / rhythm! Very good work -- new mom?


    • AnnD Moderators member
      August 31, 2008
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      No, not a new mum (not at my age ) just something inspired the write. but it wa s fun to do.
      Thankyou for visiting and for your comment.


      AnnD


  • thewhitesettler
    August 30, 2008

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    Lovely and witty poem, I don't like the photograph though. Everything comes to those who wait, seems to be the message


  • darell
    August 30, 2008
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    Outstanding!

    LOL! This was a marvelously told story about
    the life of infants in a nursery.
    I'm overwhelmed by your creativity and humor.
    I thought this was absolutely fantastic.
    In fact you should really consider publishing
    this particular piece. So many people can relate
    and would enjoy reading such a cleverly
    constructive piece. Your talent is very evident
    in this one. Great Job!


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    August 30, 2008

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    Heheh that's cute Ann! Clever nursey I wonder if that's ever been done.
    Love your rhyme in this and truly amusing imagery! I'm just glad I wasn't there to hear all that noise
    Thanks for sharing.
    Gaylene


  • Angelflower
    August 30, 2008

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    Oh! This is really cute!! you did such a wonderful job!! I really did love this!!The ending made me smile..lol. thank you very much for sharing!!!


    Angel


  • Ogreatbaldone gold member
    August 30, 2008
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    simply great Ann- you should post more often- I always enjoy your work my friend- will call you soon- been very busy- my hockey league just grew by 3 new teams- more money but also more work for me hope to catch up with you soon. love to you and yours...peace Terry


  • treezaanne
    August 28, 2008
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    Ha Ha! I love this twist of the normal, peaceful, adorable baby scenario


  • suseann
    August 27, 2008

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    Too funny! But well versed piece concerning the spread of shared frustrations. It's sad to think this same commeradary doesn't always spill out in compassions in adults though,is it not? Although,we'd all be certifiable if we did I suppose. Loved it!


  • PoeticSymphony
    August 27, 2008

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    lovely poem. i love your choice of words 'ruckus' i love that word lol...what is a romper room though? never heard of it...really cool poem... xxx


  • Cyber Artist Moderators member
    August 27, 2008

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    If us kids had a tantrum Mum would stop in the middle of the shop and proceed to tell us we weren't doing it right we had to kick harder and flail our arms about better, then she would demonstrate. By this time we were so embarrassed by her actions we'd stop, nice one Ann...


  • Silent Cougar Moderators member
    August 27, 2008

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    Brilliant....

    This is an absolute beauty, bringing all there is to see, hear and experience in the land of the little ones. A great reminder of days gone by,, and for those parents to come,,,a perfect insight. Well written and the timing is spot on.


  • symitar Moderators member
    August 27, 2008
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    This is a gem, yes it is!!!

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