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His Kiss

The warmth of your hands as you caress my face
Pulling me in as I feel the excitement build
Love radiates through your breath
Slowly pressing your tender lips to mine
It is all I can do to keep my sanity
As you slowly part my lips with your tongue
I feel our bodies meld into one, our souls bound
My love for you is endless
Our life together will last till the ends of time

Author notes

This is really the first poem I have written about the love of my life. We have been seeing each other for about 8 months now and I have never been happier.

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  • ckwriter69
    August 29, 2008

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    Nice write, good to hear from you, its been awhile. I'm glad you've found someone!!!! Thanks for sharing your thoughts and keep writing.


    • JustBeingDevine
      September 2, 2008
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      Thanks Charley

      I have found someone indeed...and I am so thankful and so blessed I couldn't be happier. thanks for reading and commenting it is much appreciated!

      Jenn