somewhere in my mind
I weave a dream
with the yarn of sleepin desires…
a rainy day with you
walkin along me
on a way long road
a night drunk in indigo wine
on some isolated island
with just you around
a canoe ride
with you and me
lost amidst the Ross sea
a midnight walk
beside a beach
with your hands in mine
your birthday night
on top of the Mount Alps
with me strumming in till morn
a ballroom dance
on your roof top
with our shoes off
an early dawn
with you wakin up next to me
and gently kissin my forehead
a midnight pizza bake
with a chef’s hat on you
and I waitin in the shelf’s corner
a day
when you’ll be readin this poem
and say, “Yes! This is my girl”
A contest entry
- *...>Inlove With My Best Friend by Lislaine.
450 points, ended September 2, 2008, 30 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Give Me Your Love! by SincerelyMegan.
575 points, ended September 14, 2008, 44 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - "I KNEW I LOVED YOU BEFORE I MET YOU" by rinzurajan.
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• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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How did u know what's running through my mind...???
I am amazed,flabbergasted at what you wrote...
Just love him sooooo much but can't tell him...
Thanks for this wonderful entry...Good luck...
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thank you ~.~"
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Absolutely adorable!
I love each and every stanza for a different reason.
Great write, and good luck! -
BEAUTIFUL.
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Aww... this is beautiful!! success!!

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Humm...this is the poet's heart which can live a life through the words and can create the impact of love..a beautiful read indeed ..


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Very beautiful and such a sweet
thought for this contest prompt.
Well done and I hope that you do
well with this one in the contest!
Jeremy0826
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