One lone frog
sitting morosely on a log
staring at the starry night sky
croaking a mournful tune
sitting morosely on a log
he waits for his love to return
croaking a mournful tune
in tribute to his undying love
he waits for his love to return
in tribute to his undying love
one lone frog
A contest entry
- Fill an Empty Meadow by fantasysmurf.
666 points, ended September 10, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Piggy will love you, one day Kermit!
Oh so sweet. The frog is the only animal I know who will let himself be known in the dark of night "croaking a mournful tune in tribute of his undying love". Thanks for adding some life to my meadow!
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The visuals this creates is delightful. One can see the moonbeams glisten on lilly pad and hear his mournful calls.
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They do sound quite morose at times, don't
they? Ah, little lonely frog - I hope he finds new love on the pond come spring.
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Interesting. I find myself feeling this way often. Very nice.
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Cute Cute Cute!
This is an adorable poem! I like the style! Could be a cute little froggie song with the right tune! Nice repetition as well. Makes the poem unique! Nice work!
Best regards and good luck!
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First of all I'm a frog fanatic...the little ceramic ones are all over my garden...that's another story...
frogs do seem like they are waiting ....for their friend......for a kiss....
this was whimsical and just a nice read.
It would be wonderful to know if such animals have feelings in any way such as ours...lol
Very magical.
Blessings gypsy,
LOWELL
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