You made love in my heart
As you kissed me with your eyes
And I kissed you with mine.
The flavor of stimulation, excitement and arousal
Was on your sumptuous lips like rose petals on a lake.
Do you remember that night when we both leaned in
And our lips met in the middle?
When my lips mingled with yours
And our tongues spoke love to each other?
That was the night your kisses
Were like sensuous droplets of fresh rain
And my body came alive
With a kaleidoscope of sensations.
It was a kiss that penetrated my soul
So kiss me until the dawn arrives
An infinite kiss that will linger on my lips for a lifetime.
A contest entry
- What Is A Kiss by nevadapoet.
700 points, ended September 8, 2008, 50 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Awesome write...a beautiful picture painted with your words.
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Oh YES
I had a Lady that curled my toes and set me on fire.
The arrow went deep into my soul. I learned one thing from that--keep your shield up at all times.
A very good write and it flows so nicely.
bw
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this poem is beautiful! and i entered the same competition hehe my poem feels inferior compared to this. good luck xoxo
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Beautiful poem. very well done. The imagery and metaphor used are second to none.
Well done.
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A beautiful interpretation of a kiss. Incredibly descriptive with excellent metaphor and verbiage.
Good luck in the contest, and clappy dudes!
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this was a wonderful write. I do have one suggestion, and i've had it given to me as well but now i see what they mean. You capitalize ever line and it causes pause that weren't needed while reading. but it was very beautiful! loved it so very much! keep on penning
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This is part of an article about capitalizing:
Capitalizing the first letter of each beginning word in a line of poetry is traditional, if not contemporary and common. Historically, this is how poetry has been distinguished from other art forms when rendered on the page, and writing it this way is still often taught in elementary and secondary schools. In scholarship, of course, it is de rigueur that one be careful to note this capitalization, and to reproduce it faithfully when quoting. -
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I know its traditional hon, i just saw that i paused alot and i figured i would mention it i didn't mean any hard criticisms by it.I really loved your poem hon. I capatalize alot of my poetry like that i just noticed the pause at the end of each line and i figured i would mention it and with fact that you meant for it this way, I'm sorry and i want to say one more time i truly loved your piece!
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No hard criticism taken. I thank you for your comment. Is that really a picture of you that I see?
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a very descriptive point for something so hard to explain...
I love this....
it's a very good poem.
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good
Wonderful truth in you words... There's such depth here... and hope. Well-done and well deserving of the recognition...
There was no error. No typos. Nothing to change. I look forward to your next
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Beautiful
So beautifully written. Thanks for sharing it with us
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Amazing
Unbelievable. What an amazing piece. Everything is done so well, I'm actually at a loss for words.
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