Oh how I love the Rain
Whether it's soft or a down pour
I put on my new rain gear
That I bought at the local store
My new rain boots are red
My slicker and hat are yellow
My friends are all ready too
Including some very nice fellows
We're going out to help
Someone who's stuck in the mud
Oh,O, it worse than we thought
His motor is just a dud
With all the talent in this group
And love for our fellow man
We had his car up and running
No longer was it a tin can
Oh what fun we've had this day
Being out in the rain so fresh
Now we're back inside where it's dry
And I have to change my dress
Someone built a fire in the fireplace
Now it's nice and cozy we can all dry out
My friend brought out hot dogs and marshmallows
There's plenty for everyone, no need to pout
A contest entry
- Do You Truly Love The Rain? by Ted E Bare.
300 points, ended September 1, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Say what you think
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Sounds like an adventure the way you do things in the rain just like I would also. Enjoyed theThank you for taking the time to enter "Do You Truly Love The Rain?" contest.
Ted E power of your words.
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really cool poem, i could imagine you all sat infront of the fireplace with hot dogs and marshmellows...
really cool vivid poem
awesome infact
xx good look in your contest and future poetry xx -
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Thank you Poetic, glad you liked my poem.Sitting in front of a fireplace on a cold or rainy night it wonderful.
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This is so cute! Rain can be such a
beautiful and refreshing thing. I love
how you captured this prompt in your work.
Most people are so afraid of it and when
it does rain, they just wait and hope
for the sun to rise again. Lovely
work as always my friend and good luck
to you with this one!
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Thank you Jeremy, glad you enjoyed reading my poem. I love to be in the rain and jump into puddles and see them splash. Take care of you and God bless you...Katie
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