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Within These Pages

Missing image

Each day I plucked a pure red rose

to remind me of your love

filling pages of my heart

with ink that's bleeding dry.

 

 Faithfully the diary speaks

of my eternal love

never has a day gone by

where inscriptions are penned with velvet.

 

So long ago I lost you

yet this yearning fills my soul

as petals of my devotion

lay tenderly within each page.

 

Until the day we're joined once more

I'll write my love herein

as my heart bleeds in painful testimony

chapters will end  when souls join in heaven.

 

 

 

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  • Carolina Moon gold member
    August 31, 2008

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    A truly beautiful write my friend. Alot of emotion in this piece. Great work!


  • Stardust-luvr
    August 30, 2008

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    well written as the precious memories written with heavenly promise brings the eternal devotion to life and beside us close when they have sadly left us. I know when my Mom and mother in law passed (they had passed 2 weeks apart in 2003) i would write to them my thoughts and feelings when i needed to feel then near. thank you for entering and many blessings always xxx


  • Desire gold member
    August 27, 2008

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    Precious~

    Oh My this is a Beauty of a verse~ Love the picture and Excellent take on the prompt
    Wonderful emotions You have voiceed
    These lines touch~
    Faithfully the diary speaks
    of my eternal love

    Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    Best wishes too
    and much love & light~ Desire~*~


  • Frozentearz
    August 27, 2008

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    A very enduring write showing love knows no time pressed between the pages. Beautiful write,
    Best of luck to you in the contest.
    Blessings.
    Frozentearz


  • MelodiousDreaming
    August 27, 2008
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    Beautifully written, best of luck to you in the contest(though I doubt you'll need it)
    ^_^

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