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Grandiose




I walked along a long time on trails well known
climbing up to adret rocky mountain major passes
when the zephyr of dawn envelop for a pride shown
from its fingers misty on these vast floral masses.

With a cumulus milky monotone in flamboyant colors,
arming along the nascent days on a perilous summit
I weigh my past, my present, a drunkenness in arbors
guiding tenderly to convince, a confession to commit.
















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Adret:
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adret Pronunciation
–noun
a side of a mountain receiving direct sunlight.

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  • Frodofan silver member
    August 27, 2008
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    So, what type of meter would you call this?

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