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Black Cat Dreaming

Black cat dreaming
sleek, graceful
pad, pad, softly
wet face pressed
upon my window
watching, waiting
Black cat mother
where are you?
I love you
*
If anyone else is pleased to see me in the morning, he is the only one who shows it. He is the only one who tells me I bring him contentment, warmth, gladness…
*
Amber, almond eyes
gleam trust, adoration
Black cat lover
grazes legs, purring
warm, gentile, regal
agile bound to
our kitchen table
Black cat mother
smoodge me dear
*
Who else is going to stay with me, play with me, calm me, lick my salty tears, perch close to me, heat the bottom of my bed, stretch out for hours beside me, see me only, always, as beautiful, see me truly, make me smile…
smile…
*
Black cat mother
slow, pensive,
pad, pad, medium-soft
drinks black coffee
window watching, waiting
whisper wishing
Black cat dreaming
where are you?
I love you too

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  • MagicElves
    March 15

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    awww! that is so cute I like the first paragraph and about the black cat and it's mother miss it kitten!


  • treezaanne
    September 1, 2008
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    Thanks for comment. I am totally overwhelmed by this site at the moment!!! Been a "booksie" girl (can I say that?) However it is fun getting the feel of it.


  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    August 28, 2008
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    Welcome to AllPoetry!

    I think black cats are awesome, and the only ones I have had as my personal compaions. Like the descripves interlaced with your train of throughts in this.

    Welcome to AP. If you have any questions or need help with anything, feel free to IM me.
    Keep expressing through writing.


  • AnnD Moderators member
    August 27, 2008

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    Ahhh cats are such wonderful and devoted companions.
    I can totally relate to this as I hae a couple of black cats of my own.
    I thoroughly enjoyes reading.

    Welcome to our site.

    AnnD
    Site Supervisor