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Stop!

Inhale the air of Reason!
Dusting particles of household
mania fills the lungs with unknow
joy

Exhale the fallow expectations
washing dishes dries the hands
Expose the story-line of pain
"johnny-brushing" stains secreted.

Toilets. Tubs. Cooking. Cleaning.
STOP!!! Fill the lungs with unknown
space.
Immerse the mind in deepest

silence.
Songs of fire cools with STOP!

Stillness breathes, pulsates in
clamor
penetrates internal truths
Divest myself my mind of duties
rest my fingers, back and thighs

Free fall the mustery of household
madness
Slide down the upward future
tense

Milk the teats of past and
future
Enter the portal of
                                                          STOP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  • Nature Song silver member
    August 28, 2008

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    Stop...we all want to say and hear. Let me hulp you clean that kitchen...which we never hear! Great penning! Goodluck in my contest ~Sie