enticement hangs sinful
shaking my defenses under allure's chiffon moon,
impulses heighten to sheer longing
reaching climatic fruit of desire,
indulgent needs; just out of reach,
tempting naked decadence
in wickedness thrust upon my core
Author notes
tiffanymericle.deviantart.com/art/Vengeful-Woman-96139707
30-60 words
A contest entry
- Quickie Anyone??? You Know You Want To... by Sweet Impatience.
800 points, ended September 5, 2008, 7 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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knock knock knock - hi, i have just moved in next door, and i am making a pie, but sadly i need an apple, would you by chance have one spare?
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LMAO I just might have a spare!
You'll have to come in and find out lol 
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I love this poem that you have written. the imagery through out this poem is absolutely excellent. I really love both stanzas very much. You did a brilliant job with the prompt..
good luck in the contest
kat
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Thank you for the kind comment and thank both you and Ken for the honor of Gold in your contest. Loved the pic and enjoyed writing for it!
Linda
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Excellent
Such a powerful creation for the image. So very well done. Best of luck in the contest.
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excellent~
Sinful indulgence indeed
This is quite the picture isn't it sis?
You have all the sinful indulgence penned perfectly in this poem...
Excellent poem and good take on the prompt
Best of luck in the contest
It's a winner in my book
Hugs
Your sis
Susan~~~
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It sure is quite the pic! Fun to write to. Thank you for your comment my friend.
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Nice. I had looked at the prompt earlier. Your poem reminded me of a version of the old story from Genesis.
Great job.
Mike
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Thanks Chucks..why not look at the prompt again and enter it this time lol
(love the elk pic!)
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