Love on-line,
Can you believe,
It really does exist,
Finding the one, your soul mate,
Only a keyboard click.
Magic it's right there,
Within a colored screen,
If you just give it a chance,
Open your heart ,
Prepare to be amazed.
A contest entry
- Do What You Do Best! by Touchof1der.
600 points, ended September 3, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Interesting
We can pretend to be anything/anyone with just a key board and a screen to detect truth. However, the same can often be said of face to face meetings.BUT, it is said that 95% of communication when you meet someone is none verbal, and that ultimately is the key to relationships which are to develop beyond online communication. So I would say caution is the watch word
Nevertheless a good poem
Regards David
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If only it was as easy as that sigh...
C
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I like this. It has good flow, and as Iridessa says it's also true.
Well done
Pam
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This is true. Although I have never met anyone on line per say. I have talked to them of course but never met them outside of the web. I guess you could call me a scardy cat! You never know what they may be. In Love & Light... Blessed Be! ~~Iridessa MoonFlower~~
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I think you speak the truth, because while I am wary of it ever happening to me - i know of so many who have done it this way, and found true happiness in themselves. Not only that, but these days, even the people that you meet while out socialising are not necessarily what they seem so it could be a luck of the draw issue really couldnt it =)
one tiny thing;
"It really does existed," <-- think that should just be exist? Nice job on this, I enjoyed reading it! 
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hey thanks for that
man i really should double triple and you know again check my work....... -
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Ahra, no matter how many times you check something we still miss out on stuff now and then that will hit someone else as blindingly obvious
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This is an interesting one to me.
Mixing love, an immortal never ending thing,
with the modern and new internet.
I consider them opposites but you did a very good job in this poem joining them.
Also deals with a very real thing, many people do find love online, which is just amazing.
Well written.
Samuel
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Find him/her anyway you can! When love is real, it is the most spectacular feeling in the world. Best of luck to you in the contest. I appreciate your taking the time and making the effort to enter. I hope it proved to be an enjoyable experience and challenge for you.
♥ Touchof1der -
That's the way I found my love. Online. It's amazing. I hope that everyone can find their soul mate, if not in person, then online.
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