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in the manner of hands

 

 

 

 

 

we remember each morning
the art of you
 
how you weigh a small
urgency; raise it round, toward
our sky
 
looking for cracks
 
each word as a closet-
small and warm,
a crucible of hidden things
and dust ... and dreams

 
and you whisper-demands
to spare us our silver;
 
hide finger-ends in pools of grey
 
for loss enters cunning
by the smallest cut
 
 
all flesh opens sly
 
 
ajar
by the things we lost,
but more
by those we cannot
find-

 

surcease settled
by your hand,

your care for other
 
each line peeled wide,
so simple
in movement; so difficult
in art,
the way words pour through pale
cracks,

 
through lines of palm

to ears of far away,

 

never hoarded

by the equity of a silence
 
unspoken
 
 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • paulcreates silver member
    September 18, 2008

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    EK this is such a felt tribute to one of my tip top favorites in all All-dome.
    You are a poet.

    Paul


  • Allyce May gold member
    September 18, 2008

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    Loved your last three lines! This is so soft, but yet so powerful - just like Kathleen. I am in awe of how well you pack so much meaning into every single line. Every word is perfectly placed, I can't fault it. Love it completely.

    Thanks for sharing


  • zochit2me gold member
    August 28, 2008

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    This is soft but with a strength that she has. Making others feel good about themselves is her life's mission. She will love this



    ♥Becky♥


  • Tirrell
    August 27, 2008
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    wow, this is an intensly beautiful write, very moving.

  • Suzanne Dia
    August 27, 2008

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    Beautifully written for a beautiful woman.


  • iverbthenoun
    August 27, 2008
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    this is so describes her poetry!! very well done


  • transcendental baby gold member
    August 27, 2008
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    That's lovely


  • Cannonsfire
    August 27, 2008

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    She will like this, love the reference to palms and hands, it brings this a softness yet strength to it that reminds me of Kathleen. Love, C

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