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Man is the best

Man is the best of creations.
It starts from matter ends up to man.
Bodily, from first life to man is evolution.
But the Soul of man does not evolve.
It is the core of man as of other objects.
In man, manifestation of God is highest.
Man only can realize God.
But the man who does all wrong deeds
Is an animal in the body of a man.
Thus the Soul in man can go to animal body.
This cycle of matter to man
Or man to matter is continuous.
An enlightened man can realize the fact that
Neither man nor animal is devoid of God.

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  • Death of the Author
    September 27, 2008

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    Even though I am not a believer in God, I can really relate to what you say, a man can become an animal and even vice versa, in terms of soul. Nicely put, thank you for entering.


  • Poetess12
    August 27, 2008

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    Your poem is interesting. Wonderfully written

    I like how you used the word "Man" in your poem.

    Thanks for your entry.


  • Rebekah-Ann silver member
    August 27, 2008

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    What a splendid write!!!
    Rich in text and rich in wisdom!

    All the best in this contest!

    Becks