Have an apple my dear...
Teeth broke the ripe red skin,
and sunk deep within...
A mouthful she did swallow,
her legs felt weak and hollow.
She collapsed,
beating by the witches trap...
Spitting up blood
she choked on vomit.
And from it she wriggled and jiggled
and died without a scream...
Oh mirror, mirror on the wall,
do tell me I'm the fairest of them all?
Author notes
http://cyril-helnwein.deviantart.com/art/Snow-White-the-Poison-Apple-70960956
A contest entry
- Snow white :)... the Other side of the story... by Lady Michaella.
302 points, ended September 12, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Wow. Powerful much? This one is a very dark write, and also, I might say, a VERY amazing write! Depicts the picture beautifully
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thank you glad you like it i liked the idea for the contest and the pics were great take care
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thank you glad you like it i liked the idea for the contest and the pics were great take care
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this is really good I also entered this contest. good luck to you
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thank you i guess im beat then (; lol take care
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Very nice, I love it!
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thank you
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Whew. You did an excellent job on that. Rhyme, twisted fairy tale, creepiness...
Excellent.
Write on.
~*~SP~*~
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why thank you im gkad you liked it
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Oooh... I like this. -Shiver.- Thumps up mister.
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THANK YOU
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