Mock beauty with its feckless voice, mans deepest, mortal sin,
in dead repose, beneath my feet, I relish with a grin,
sick fairy tale from blinded truth, false promises of light,
sweet death from Edens blackest fruit, the fate for damned Snow White.
True beauty lies in darkness, no illusion blinds my eyes,
No childlike thoughts or painted words, no scripted fabled lies,
false prophets, in naivety, paint pictures of deceit,
so heed my words, applaud my pain, my bitterness tastes sweet..
Author notes
Credit - http://penguina-mica.deviantart.com/art/Snow-White-94091628
I'm in no way an advanced writer but I hope you enjoy it.
A contest entry
- Snow white :)... the Other side of the story... by Lady Michaella.
302 points, ended September 12, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Great take on the prompt, flows smoothly and good rhyme throughout. Fine job here, best of luck... Scott
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BRAVO BRAVO, YOU TOOK THIS RIGHT OUT SIDE THE BOX AND I WOULD LOVE TO SEE THIS WIN REALLY BEAUTIFUL
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Beautiful take on the prompt!! I loved how this poem was written!
Thanks for entering
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