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Take a Giant Step Outside Your Mind

Sometimes love is only sleeping,
so come with me, leave yesterday behind;
with your wings, I can learn to fly.

Here comes tomorrow, another day;
fading through the door into summer,
where life won't be the same.

Author notes

Yep - it's Monkees themed.
A poem with title prompts italicized.

In a list

A contest entry

Hmmm...can you guess the inspiration?

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  • Frogzter gold member
    August 27, 2008
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    Fabulous!


  • Desire gold member
    August 27, 2008

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    Oh My Word~

    You know whenever Life can takes it turns- The Monkees always gives that extra lift to reach the stars
    Love this!! I was just about to go on YouTube after judging my contest to watch a few episodes
    The third line so grabs



    Woot!! Excellent take on the prompt
    Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    Best wishes too
    and much love & light~ Desire~*~


  • superstition
    August 27, 2008

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    Thanks so much for your contest entry. Love the titles you came up with, and especially loved how you gave me a poem to read right along with them!! Nice idea. I believe I could work with your titles pretty easily. Thanks for the inspiration and good luck in the contest.