The apple fell from her hands
as she hit the ground
Pure as snow
and cold to the touch
Death becomes you
my beautiful princess
Will she ever rise
from this terrible fate
Snow White, has lost it all
the poisonious apple caused her
To fall, and through the veil
you can see the tears
The seven dwarves are in a mess
for the loss of their dear
Princess, who is quite dead
and no one can save her now
Pure as snow
and cold to the touch
There's nothing left
of the Snow White we used to know
Author notes
http://penguina-mica.deviantart.com/art/Snow-White-94091628
A contest entry
- Snow white :)... the Other side of the story... by Lady Michaella.
302 points, ended September 12, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Great literal take on the prompt. Things dont always work out "happily ever after" It's about time she got hers!! Well done, best of luck...Scott
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Ty glad you liked it
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THIS IS REALLY GOOD BEST OF LUCK IN THE CONTEST
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This is fabulous, what a great metaphorical take on someone we all know and love, life is just like Forrest Gump says, like a box of chocolates, we never know what we will get.... I hope life is kinder to you than to Snow White. Thank you for commenting on my words.I appreciate it!
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and thank you. for a kind comment. glad you liked it.
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Beautiful ending to the poem. I really enjoyed reading this, a lot. I am glad you took it quite literally and spoke about the dwarfs and all that, great job
Thanks tones for entering!!
-RoseDaughter-
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