Why does it matter to you what I do?
I think you need to re-construe.
You don’t know me or how I feel
All you know is how to kill
My life is now rearranged
Sometimes I feel a little deranged
I do what I can
Cause now I’m a man
But I have no clue,
What am I to you?
You’ve distanced me away from you
The girl of whom I thought I knew
But you’re not her she’s dead and buried
The girl I thought that I would marry
But things have change a lot since then
You’re full of hate and lost within
I wish that things could be better
So I thought one day I’ld write you a letter
You found the note in a nice fold
But you through it away like something old
You’ve made me think about my whole life
And every moment filled with strife
After that I felt no pain
Then I had to start again
I have forgotten about all that stuff
After a while I kind of got tuff
So when you see me please don’t fret
Because now you know I did forget
Our problems we had are now deceased
Your image is faded to say the least
You’re the girl that I have forgotten
The girl who’s dead, buried, and rotten
Author notes
Option 4... Whatshername-by Green Day
A contest entry
- Mosaic by Ms. Black Eyeliner.
700 points, ended September 18, 2008, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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hey can you put the option in your notes
please please
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"But things have change a lot since then
You’re full of hate and lost within" i love this line i've been in that situation
great job good luck in the contest
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i love it
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Dude was amazing powerful...WoW!!!
Man I knew you could write but I didn't know this well....Dang in this poem you kinda make you envy you....Wow great poem...this was by far the best and like Sarah had said, "So dark but yet so beautiful" WOW!!! I can't say it enough. -
Dude was amazing powerful...WoW!!!
Man I knew you could write but I didn't know this well....Dang in this poem you kinda make you envy you....Wow great poem...this was by far the best and like Sarah had said, "So dark but yet so beautiful" WOW!!! I can't say it enough.
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Larry! This is the absolute best write I have EVER read!
I have never read something so well written. Everything is perfect. All the lines fit all the words are perfect. I love it! I am sorry that all this had to happen but I know that it made you a all out better person! I love you larry and this is an amazing write!
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i have never in my life heard a poem so...dark yet so beautiful, you did an absolute amazing job on this! good job ;}
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larry....wow
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