you insist gloves on
and that's okay baby
because I can glide
across your cock
with velvet ease
I will make you hard
and you will let me suck it
and I will find it hard to breathe
see these nipples
erect and red
they match my gloves
and with the music playing
I will dance for you
stroke my breasts
in red gloved hands
slide them down my legs
grab my clit and rub it
so close to your face
take your tongue and lick it
put your mouth on my lips
part the red sea
it's wet in there
can't you see
I will straddle your thighs
as your cock rears high and proud
and as we fuck together
I'll scream long and loud
we'll bump and grind
you'll lick and suckle
at my tits like a slave of lust
and when your fingers make me cum
I'll shout again! We Must!!
I'll never get enough of you
or your cock of rare proportions
so here I am with legs wide spread
just asking you to pork me
A contest entry
- Make Me Hot! by hotchocolate.
450 points, ended September 5, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Does it make you cum?
Comments
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WOW-where have you been all my life--Damn!
I wish there were 5 or ten applauds--you deserve it.
Oh yeah!
That's enough for tonight.
bw

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Too hot to handle huh?
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Why yes it does!
Such hot images, worth reading again and again and...
after reading this OOoooo is my lover going to GET IT !
Thanks for the heat

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Caliente!!!!
Excellent!!!! Very sexy write girl...hats off to you!!!

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L.O.L.
whew! wow..uhmmm... yeah congrats on the 'goal!' l.o.l.

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Wonderfully erotic!
I loved this piece from beginning to end.
Good luck to you with this hot write!
Jeremy0826 -
SIZZLING!!!
WOW!! -- you are a wild & wanton woman!!! Tell it like it IS, Baby ... !!!! (heat, hard, urgency, wetness welling up ...!)


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Not hot enough for me but overall a very good write!
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Everyone loves a good screw!!!!
Good Luck!!
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