I dream
of a free world
where compassionate hearts
reign supreme upon green waters
let peace be our inner sanctum within
a spark flickers any lighthouse
angels of truth seek souls
visions un-furl
I dream
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A rictameter is a nine lined stanza with a syllable count of 2,4,6,8,10,8,6,4,2
beginning and ending with the same two syllables.
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my dearest you are my shining light and the write lends peace within my soul as tears fall from a lost spirit seeking to find her haven amongst love, peace, and promises. well done my dearest many loving blessings always xxxxx love you always forever xxxxx
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Absolutely Stunning!!
Tim, only you can pull off such an inspirational, artistic challenge as beautifully as you do. Love it!! Thank you for sharing, and take care!! Peace, cyn 
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Excellent..I adore this my dear brother, such beauty in your words...
Many blessings
~A~
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don't rictameters also measure earthquakes?
it's not that unrealistic a dream bro... if you confine it to "your own little world". I'll live in that world.
angels of truth seek souls... as such souls always seek angels of truth, funny how they rarely find one another.
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very well written and amazing way of words love it! very much..its profound flow and wonderful feeling too it
where compassionate hearts regin supreme upon green waters...such amazing line it touched me
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A beautiful dream, indeed. My dearest brother; your inner light and the goodness of your huge great really shine in this one. Perfect syllable count, and such a smooth flow. The line you chose to begin and end is wonderful, and your center line stands on it's own perfectly. An exceptional rictameter!! I love it, and you, dear man.
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I think most of us dream about this, but not enough say it. This is a heartfelt write and I am glad you are able to share emotions through poetry.
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Tis' a beautiful dream, dear 'weaver.
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No matter which form you choose,
the light within you shines, Timothy.
Aesthete
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that was really cool!
And meaningful!
Goodwork!
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impressive my dear friend! We all dream of that hope.
I dream
of a free world
where compassionate hearts
reign supreme upon green waters
let peace be our inner sanctum within
Beautiful!
~Lisa~
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Yes...I dream too. I share your vision brother!Pam
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What a perfect rictameter...
Such an excellent write...Your talent shines once again, Bro
I love ya
Lynda
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