Behind this blind
I hide so well
the beauty within
goodbye to this beautiful angel
we shall see no more
behind my eyes
I say goodbye to
the beauty that can't change
who I have become
Author notes
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Option 5
A contest entry
- Are You Ready??? It's Time for Another Quickie by Sweet Impatience.
980 points, ended August 29, 2008, 14 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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very powerful poem that you have. the emotions just jump right off the page. such a sad piece, but profound. you did an excellent job with the prompt ... your poem is Fantastic.
good luck in the contest
kat
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Wow, excellent piece, full of rich emotions. Has an air of sorrow to it I feel to, superb work. Good luck
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omfg thats amazing! Wow, so emotional.. wow... im speachless lol, its just great.. brilliant.. woa.. lol
sorry speachless again
Good luck
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tytysm for such a wonderful comment.
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