walk threw my mind and you will see
all the pain inside of me
torture my body and ruin my soul
in order to leave you must pay the toll
the ultimate price the cost of your life
taken away by the touch of a knife
deep as an ocean dark as night
till the end i will always fight
enter my mind , get slaughtered alive
no one will ever survive
so take you last step into the depths below
then you shound feel you blood start to flow
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like the poem
its ok you can call at regular time today though -
Dark
Very dark. I love this poem. I wouldn't mind getting in your mind...its quite simaliar to mine. -
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I don't mind gettin lost in ur mind. Seems quite akin to mine. On line 1 you made a typo: it's through not threw. And on line 12: it's should not shound. But other than that, I love it. That was captivating in a dangerous sense.
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I love it.
seems like it wound be very interesting to get lost in your mind=)
wonderful.
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i think i would like to get lost in your mind just before my time so i canrealy know wat happens!!! great write
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Great write, very dark and twisted
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yikes.... I don't want to bump into you, ever.
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haha! I like this..great write mr anonymous!!
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