I wish I had a girlfriend, cute as one could pretend
I wish I had a girlfriend, just like all my friends,
to love her and hold till the end, to brush her teeth
if willing she would be
I wish I had a girlfriend, thrilling as one could see
I wish I had a girlfriend, to kill my boredoms ascend,
and to go through doors of life contend
Such would bring sunshine to a life dead
Butter my onion bread
Bring laughter into a house of dread
Lust to a lonely bed
Oh do I have to go and pretend, call on my blistered
hand instead. Never did my parents comprehend why I’m
still a lonely sod, always I’ve tried to act the
typical male, hiding my shame from all but god
And so I prevailed
Gave nothing of myself away
Gratification on the devils tail, salvation far from the
mind, purgation from hells pathway declined
And I remain blind to mankind’s ways
Oh I wish I had a girlfriend, one to go with okay
One to pass my days, to obey me and fucking stay for
better or worse, one to nurse me when sick
One I can call my chick, fucking rape if she won’t
lick my dick
Yeah I wish I had a girlfriend, to lick my woes away
Now that would take me from closet gay to marionette
plays, to suffocate slowly this slut on strings
And imprison into the madness I bring
Master of slaves I am, and I wish I had a girlfriend
to slam and condemn into submissive justice
Author notes
A master in need of his slave, a strange kind of love but one that does exist in our society. Domination over another some people crave more then equal love, and some hide their secret from even close friends as who would understand.
"Venom of a thousand needles"
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I read the majority of the comments on this piece and i have to say, in my opinion, they are dead wrong.
i thought this was a very raw, insightful, honest, piece! i really enjoy those writers that can pen their true thoughts without worrying about others thoughts or opinions.. if more authors did this, then the world would be less full of rage, anger , and secrets, BRAVO!!!!
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This was not particularly the best piece I've read but is by far not the worst either. The ever extended lines and rocky rhythm made it tedious to read but it is an interesting idea to use, I will admit.
Blessed be.
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This is a nice piece, not overly deep just more to the points, but I did enjoy reading it. Nice work
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Okay.. this is indeed dark but brutally honest as well. Thanks for giving me an insight into the psyches of tortured males such as you
An amazing piece of heartfelt poetry- do hope you can settle some of these issues soon.. All the best
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This rocks! It starts out innocent and quirky,
if willing she would be
Butter my onion bread
with shades of sadness and longing.
And then before you even notice, crescendos into these twisted obscenities and depravities.
'if willing she would be' transforms into 'fucking rape if she won’t lick my dick'
Very powerful.
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