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late night ramblings?

it started in my chest
beneath my black vest.
a feeling unshakeable
and quite unmistakeable.
a longing for a feeling
staring at the ceiling.
tracing cracks across
i'm feeling quite a loss.
i can't quite steal your heart
and now we're miles apart.
you won't give me the time of day
and now my heart has flown away
with expectations of more then friends
tell me, will this ever end?
i can't keep sitting, waiting, and wishing
but i can't tell you exactly how i'm feeling.
i really wish i could know,
should i stay or should i go?

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idk. from a while ago.
found it and posted.
i really don't fucking know.

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  • BAMFNx3
    August 27, 2008
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    asdfghjkl!

    this was freaking great! i loved every line!

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