She will rest for many weeks,
in her soft cocoon
Slowly evolving until the day,
of the third full moon
Her chrysalis will keep her warm,
soaking in the sun
Safely she will lie in wait,
until the change is done
For fifteen years she’s been a girl,
what difference can she see
When she awakes her life will change,
for a woman she will be
Her heart and mind will be anew,
and love may fill her soul
The lies and games from boys to men,
might take a dreadful toll
No longer can she just smile and wait;
now time has joined her plight
Restraint by her must be exercised,
almost each and every night
Though she wishes to love a man,
can she find one true and pure
For she has seen what men can do,
what her mother did endure
She knows of one his heart is good,
with him; her life she could share
But he has not yet turned a man,
and of that she must beware
He will rest for many weeks,
in his soft cocoon
Slowly evolving until the day,
of the third full moon
Author notes
http://night-fate.deviantart.com/art/i-always-waited-here-for-you-93737948
A contest entry
- Are You Ready??? It's Time for Another Quickie by Sweet Impatience.
980 points, ended August 29, 2008, 14 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Beautifully done ~ congrats on your gold win


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this is absolutely beautiful.. the imagery is beautiful through out this poem. I love this one so much.. excellent job with the prompt.. Fantastic job on the poem..
good luck in the contest
kat


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Love how this goes full circle. A beautiful and very creative take on the picture. All the best in the contest


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this is really good, shows the imagery of the picture really well good luck to you.
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What a beautiful poem!! I agree with Angelflower, the flow is great n i also love it hehe good luck in the contest
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enjoyed reading your poem

beautifully written


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Oh this was really beautiful!! so soft!! And the flow was wonderful as well!! bravo! I truly loved it!! thank you very much for sharing!! best of luck!
Angel
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Very soft and beautiful with some
lovely imagery. I love the story
that you told here and how captured
this picture. Well done and all the
best to you in this contest! Keep it up!
Jeremy0826

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