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Cycle of Life

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She will rest for many weeks,
in her soft cocoon
Slowly evolving until the day,
of the third full moon

Her chrysalis will keep her warm,
soaking in the sun
Safely she will lie in wait,
until the change is done

For fifteen years she’s been a girl,
what difference can she see
When she awakes her life will change,
for a woman she will be

Her heart and mind will be anew,
and love may fill her soul
The lies and games from boys to men,
might take a dreadful toll

No longer can she just smile and wait;
now time has joined her plight
Restraint by her must be exercised,
almost each and every night

Though she wishes to love a man,
can she find one true and pure
For she has seen what men can do,
what her mother did endure

She knows of one his heart is good,
with him; her life she could share
But he has not yet turned a man,
and of that she must beware

He will rest for many weeks,
in his soft cocoon
Slowly evolving until the day,
of the third full moon


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  • MysticalRayne
    August 29, 2008
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    Beautifully done ~ congrats on your gold win


  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    August 29, 2008

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    this is absolutely beautiful.. the imagery is beautiful through out this poem. I love this one so much.. excellent job with the prompt.. Fantastic job on the poem..

    good luck in the contest

    kat


  • LadyDementia gold member
    August 27, 2008

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    Love how this goes full circle. A beautiful and very creative take on the picture. All the best in the contest


  • fairytalelovestory
    August 27, 2008
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    this is really good, shows the imagery of the picture really well good luck to you.


  • Lady Michaella
    August 26, 2008

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    What a beautiful poem!! I agree with Angelflower, the flow is great n i also love it hehe good luck in the contest


  • charcoal
    August 26, 2008

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    enjoyed reading your poem
    beautifully written


  • Angelflower
    August 26, 2008

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    Oh this was really beautiful!! so soft!! And the flow was wonderful as well!! bravo! I truly loved it!! thank you very much for sharing!! best of luck!

    Angel


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    August 26, 2008

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    Very soft and beautiful with some
    lovely imagery. I love the story
    that you told here and how captured
    this picture. Well done and all the
    best to you in this contest! Keep it up!




    Jeremy0826

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