you are so fragile and so weak
yet you can hurt me when you only speak
you also fill my heart with love only
which i have dreamed of
up untill this point in in life
my hearts filled with the pain life
when we met you took the pain away
and brought me into the light of day
which helped me make it throught this night
and gave me a reason to keep with this fight
in hope that you just might be the one and only miss right
Author notes
this is dedicated to the one who brought a smile to replace the frown that once covered my face
In a list
just be real when you give me critisism
Comments
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Very sweet. You do have some rhymes in there.
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This is a great poem of gratitude, love and respect.
I feel it would read better with some punctuation and a small spell check for 'fragile' and 'weak'
Wonderful poem!
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