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It's Now Or Never

It's now or never
For you and me darling
It's now or never
Just hold me tight

It's now or never
Here in the moonlight
It's now or never
For this is our night

Kiss me my darling
Hold me ever closer to you
It's now or never my darling
For our love is oh so true

So once again my darling
I'll sing this song to you
It's now or never my love
As my heart beats so true

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Song it's now or never, I just listened to it by Elvis on youtube

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  • Katie Lazette
    September 8, 2008
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    Thank you for your comment and for holding the contest. Oh yes, have you listened to Elvis sing It's now or never, He repeats it 5 times at the end of the song. It sold millions of copies. Just a note on repetitions. Some fly some don't...Katie


  • etoile
    September 7, 2008

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    i didn't like the repetition or the rhyme much
    but some of the lines were well written, like
    'It's now or never my love
    As my heart beats so true '

    thanks for entering


  • aanika
    August 28, 2008

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    LOL,
    knowing emma,
    I don't think she meant the Elvis version.
    anyways, nice poem
    but I didn't like the repetition.