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I Curse Myself

 

 

 

 

Desperation hits me

 

like an arrow

 

straight through the heart

 

I feel exhausted

 

like I have climbed forever

 

only to find myself

 

being sucked back in

 

for all of my faults

 

every immoral thought

 

I curse my own being

 

I feel so lost and alone

 

knowing that I deserve this

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

30-60 Words
Picture Prompt

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  • Ms. Black Eyeliner
    September 4, 2008
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    u love this poem great job


  • Lyric-Freak
    September 2, 2008

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    I love the way you set thisd out, it hit me first thing I saw. I love the wording and the spacing. Thanks for sharin'


  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    August 31, 2008

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    I feel that this is a write that many can relate to, I know that I can. I've felt like this more often that not. Your interpretation of the prompt is a very sad one, but as I just stated many can relate.. Excellent take on the prompt and on your poem.

    good luck in the contest

    kat

  • Shadow Darkstar
    August 27, 2008

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    It seems the picture and the title both, fit this peice very well. I curse myself a lot too, for my own faults, stupid moments, mistakes, and well, when I'm angry and have stubbed my big toe on the dang corner of the wall again. Great write Jeremy.


  • AutumnGypsy gold member
    August 26, 2008

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    Oh what a sad, sad interpretation of the prompt, it is true to see life like this sometimes though. Again I forsee a gold trophy in your future A stunning piece from what appears to be a very talented guy. Best to you in the contest

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