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Paper-thin Paranoia







Monotony in empty blankets
taking wing inside my darkened
eye-lids; sleep shelters the
reality of walking down a shattered
sidewalk.

Days gone by like hours in
silken subways, smooth edges
milked down to paper-thin
paranoia- water trickles down
my chin and hollow laughter
claims the breeze.

Crown my head with golden
rope and enclose them in silver
slumbers; this weight is too
heavy on my aching shoulders-

pass it over on a freeway pillow








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I'm feeling tired. Too tired to deal with reality right now.

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  • written-in-ink
    September 7, 2008

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    Crown my head with golden
    rope and enclose them in silver
    slumbers; this weight is too
    heavy on my aching shoulders-
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    very nice and i feel it you get your point across

    and me too life is too much right now

    thank you and good luck