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Exhaustion Of Monotony






Shadowed in purple eye-lids
weighed down by the need for
something more; like feverish
search for salvation in a world
where chains are fashionable.

Lay me down to rest, like bleak
solitude amongst the emptiness in
the sky- butterfly kisses cross
with the syncopation of the whispering
winds through the petals I grasp so
desperately...

The cold cement plays fire in my
hair and the crescendo of a requiem
drifts through the black tears
staining porcelain faces.

Sleep now and forever hold peace







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Photo cred: Requiem of a Butterfly by =tb-black

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  • etoile
    September 7, 2008

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    The cold cement plays fire in my
    hair and the crescendo of a requiem
    drifts through the black tears
    staining porcelain faces.

    Sleep now and forever hold peace
    ---
    i loved that part.
    great take on the picture.

    i really liked all the imagery in this write.

    thanks a lot for entering and goodluck


  • aanika
    August 28, 2008

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    The cold cement plays fire in my
    hair and the crescendo of a requiem
    drifts through the black tears
    staining porcelain faces.

    oh wow.
    I think you're going to win this.
    this was BEAUTIFUL.