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Our Dream

Hear the Siren's call while you sail away,

                                                            water laps the earths floor as the tears drown

                                                            only the steady drum of your heart breathes

                                                            upon the wind as your warmth sets and your

                                                            smile rises with the stars... 

 

 

Hear my guitar skip a cord

as the melody of your voice, echos

in the color green that enfolds me

like a tender lover wraps whisperes of goodnight's

while kissing the closing eyes of the beloved,

nature sings with your heart as vibrations set off

the chance to jump in the clear waters of a new beginning,

a future that may not last past tomorrow...

 

 

                                                                      

 

 

 

 

 Paint me pink with the caress of your lips

                                                             as the scent of you leaves me intoxicated

                                                             on your tember that vibrates through me

                                                             to astro-plain were rivers run freely

                                                             and the mountain snow kisses our eyes to sleep as

                                                             we lie wrapped up in each others lullabies

                                                             kissing tenderly the dreams we shared on the

                                                             whisper of a guitar string and a C sharp.

                                                               

Author notes

Option 1
http://night-fate.deviantart.com/art/dnyeha-somaiya-59384104

Option 4
http://foureyes.deviantart.com/art/forever-after-8578282

Option 6
http://donatocamino.deviantart.com/art/Music-Rose-67041288

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  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    August 29, 2008

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    You've done it again.. you've created a masterpiece with this poem. its beautifully presented and its an outstanding poem. the imagery is astounding to me.. I love it.. excellent take on the prompts.

    good luck

    kat


  • Riamh
    August 27, 2008

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    Ok....now that is really special. Well done Angel. Absolutely awesome.

    Slayer


  • LadyDementia gold member
    August 27, 2008

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    Wow, a sensory delight Beautifully done, some gorgeous imagery. 'clear waters of a new beginning' & 'Paint me pink' being just two of them. Awesome work, love how you've combined prompts. Good luck hunni


  • Cannonsfire
    August 27, 2008
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  • fairytalelovestory
    August 26, 2008

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    you did a wonderful job with this. i love how you combined the pics to create such a wonderful piece. good luck.


  • Bosiarbooger gold member
    August 26, 2008

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    Wonderfully said

    combining three pictures into one poem and it all ties in so nicely. wonderful write Good luck not that you need luck with this one. Boog


  • Aussie Gypsy gold member
    August 26, 2008

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    I love that you have combined a few of the options in this poem, such gentle flow and beauty caresses the reader with this piece, Best to you in the contest!


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    August 26, 2008

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    Wow, this is such a gorgeous piece!
    I love how each picture held a different
    poem to it. Wonderful work as always my
    friend and good luck to you with this one!




    Jeremy0826

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