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Tree Stepped Out by the River!

Dedicated to All Tree People!



The secret tree people arrived,
In the tree by the river they thrived...

Stepping up out of a boat,
Up the tree ladder they went to gloat..

Gloat at the people who could not see,
Them spying on them from up in their tree...

The tree ladder no give away,
Because they are invisible to most, hey!

The tree people watch day and night,
Watch the boaters and the birds in flight..

Only a special eye ever see's them,
For the beholding eye they are a treasured gem..

The fairy people who live in the tree,
Minaiture people with sharp features they be..

Rainbow wings opalescent and light,
Dancing in circles through the night..

Down by the river and up in their tree,
Live the fairy tree people so special to see!





Copyright:Kazytc
August 2008

Author notes

Allpoetry.com Contest
August 2008
~ Steps~ Picture prompt
http://allpoetry.com/contest/2419077
I took this picture today walking by the river, And the steps leading down and the steps on the tree left me wondering so many different things.
So I would like to know what it says to your muse. And of course I'm taking along my co-host
Frogzter
I had to delete the last one seems allpoetry and aol just were not getting alongsorry about the confusion with the picture..
Rules:
Any form of poetry, if using the picture give credit to me Frozentearz
Pre-writes: not this time I'm asking for you to dig into the picture of the here and now
As always Happy Writing, Tearz and Frogz.
Enter this contest
* This is not an anonymous contest - the editors will be able to see your name.
* Closes in 13 days, or after 20 more entries
* Rewards - Gold: 300, Silver: 150, Bronze: 75
* Prewritten poems are not allowed.
* Enter a new poem

Picture credit: Frozentearz

Picture depicts a tree by the river, steps leading up from the river to the tree and also up the tree too! Most curious!

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  • Violinstrings silver member
    September 11, 2008

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    very good

    it went along with the pic in contest shown and yours
    very good a poem and fairytale I am glad you won bronze


  • Frogzter gold member
    September 3, 2008

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    A most enjoyable read! I can just picture the tree people looking down upon those who visit this magical place. A great take on the prompt! Thanks for entering and best wishes,

    Frogz~


    • Kazytc
      September 3, 2008
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      Thanks millions!

      Thanks millions, for your fab and kind review you are very inspiring and encouraging.
      Glad you liked it.
      Its a great honour to enter your wonderful contest thanks for the privalege and experience.
      Hope you win gold in all your contests you well deserve to your work is excellent. Best of luck to you too!
      Poetic Hugs and Thanks Millions,
      Kaz.
      Kazytc XX


  • Black Narcissus gold member
    August 30, 2008
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    Lovely imagery.

    I enjoy journeys through the imagination.


    • Kazytc
      August 30, 2008
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      Thanks millions!

      Thanks millions, for your fab and kind review you are very inspiring and encouraging.
      Glad you liked it.
      Hope you win gold in every contest you enter, you well deserve to!
      Poetic Hugs and Thanks Millions,
      Kaz.
      Kazytc XX


  • Frozentearz
    August 27, 2008

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    This was great love it love it love it.
    very magical. love the feeling you drew from it.
    and it looks great with the back ground.
    I am sure anyone reading this will find delight.
    Thanks for joining in.
    Love and LIght
    Frozentearz


    • Kazytc
      August 28, 2008
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      Thanks Millions!

      Thanks millions, for your fab and kind review you are very inspiring and encouraging.
      Glad you liked it.
      I thought it would be nice to include your beautiful essence in my poem, you have a lovely aura.
      Its a great honour to enter your wonderful contest thanks for the privalege and experience.
      Good luck in all your contests, I hope you win gold in all of them.
      Poetic Hugs and Thanks Millions,
      Kaz.
      Kazytc XX

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