Rambling this,
this acrid kiss
this hated bliss
of this wantedness.
this world of mine
likes this heart to chime
as this sight defies
this endless lie.
What is this?
this wonton mess
this craziness
of this brainlessness?
And yet this kiss
this arid bliss
this forcefulness
is this existence.
Author notes
This
A contest entry
- What's Your Word? by Poetess12.
2400 points, ended September 8, 2008, 20 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is Brilliant
I rather liked the rhymes you used. The meter scheme and presentation made an enjoyable read
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i really love this poem!!! you should do very well in the contest!!! best of luck!! -slick99
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I really like your poem. The flow of the rhyme is good.
I like how you used the word "This"
Thanks for your entry.
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