At the end of the day
I can't wait no longer
there isn't any way
I can sit here and ponder
if it will feel right
can't wait to find out
because it just might
I honestly have no doubt
It will be the sweetest taste
of butterfly kisses on my nose
with no haste
and tingles in my toes
feeling your innocence in each peck
like a loving dove
as i wipe the dirt from you neck
I show you my love
the love of a....
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Author notes
I have come up with this with the help of a friend you can find her at this link http://allpoetry.com/tarebear thank you beautiful!!
A contest entry
- unconditional love by Moonlightdragon.
600 points, ended August 29, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - What Is A Kiss by nevadapoet.
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Comments
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Awe... This is precious.
I so enjoyed this piece.
Thank you for entering my contest.
Delila -
this is a really cute poem, i like how you describe the love of a mother so thoughtful and the butterfly kisses that we all tend to give our children, good luck in this contest and as always keep up the writing,
~Amy
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Sweet angle , a mothers kiss the sweetest kiss of all Delightful write good luck in the contest
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Beautiful write. Nicely done. Thanks for the entry.
Nevadapoet
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wonderfully
just a lovely write
thanks for your entry
Robert
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very beautiful I love butterfly kisses...this touches me in my heart. Thank you for sharing, and best of luck to you in the contest blessings always~Trisha~
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Oh, I used to do butterfly kisses with my daughter! such a sweet write!
Poesy
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Butterfly Kiss
With your faces less than a breath away, open and close your eyelids against your partners. If done correctly, the fluttering sensation will match the one in your heart.
Ilike butterfly kisses and your poem.
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This is wonderful, do adorable and full of feeling! I really relate to this one.
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So Sweet And Lovely
You have penned a beautiful poem about Mother's Love. Truly one of the strongest love throughtout our lives that guides us. A delight to read this morning. Take care. Sandy
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Sweetie your idea turned out awesome! Happy you wanted my input on this. I love it when we can get each others help. Good luck with the contest!
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