procrastination was always your strong suit,
putting me off
until you felt urges to notice me,
delinquent affection long overdue
forcing me to browse elsewhere,
sampling sweet pleasures
of fulfillment's delicacies
Author notes
Image credit:http://www.inmagine.com/axs004/axs004850-photo
Prompt-Past Due
A contest entry
- Quickie! This will be a phrase prompt. by breedluv.
600 points, ended August 27, 2008, 5 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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i was only putting you off the couch and onto the chair because i need the newspaper under the cushion where you were sat.
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But kind sir, the couch already had my ass print on it lol YOU take the chair
You're too much, you know that?!! lmao
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excellent~
Overdue love and affection would also me browse elsewhere as well sis...
Congrats on the Silver Trophy..can see why you got this shiny trophy for your mantle..
You go girlfriend
Loved this sis
Hugs
Susan~~~
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I like this take!
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I'm glad you liked my take on the prompt. Thank you for silver..had fun doing your contest.
Linda
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Sadly I feel this poem connects with me! Being treated like a "shoe". Kicked under the bed when it suits the other person, yet USED any other time.
It hurts and it weakens your defenses, making you more vulnerable!
Splendid piece!
All the best in the contest!
Becks
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It is indeed a horrid way to feel, been there myself. Thank you for your comment, much appreciated.
Linda
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Nice job on the prompt. I like it
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Thanks Chuckster.. I'm glad you enjoyed the read
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Hey good take on prompt and well penned. Good luck.
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Thanks Rick..my twisted muse went haywire
I appreciate the kind comment!
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Hey sis,
what a take on that prompt! This is great! I love it! How true your words girl! love it!
Best of luck in this contest!
and love
Nyetta
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Thank you Sis! I need all the luck I can get hehe You should enter, it's fun!
&love
Linda
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Excellent
Such a great take on the prompt. So full of emotions. Best of luck in the contest.
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Thanks bro! I can't wait to read your take yayyy
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