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Only for knowing you.

So I sat and drifted
to when I was around you.
I ponder and model my mind.
It's insane this
lost wander of thoughts
on off this trail of you.

Knowing your mind
looking for more insight
Inspiration held me.
In the grips of it's
pits so much I felt sick
and fear over came me.

Still, just to know
know your mind
read between your fine lines.
Let the art develop
freedom sings clrear
a swirl of  unknown colors.

I sit here and drift
to when I hugged you
and shied away from
a heartfelt kiss...
now I miss you,
and I only want to know you.

Now I only wonder...
when I will see,
how I will react,
what I will do,
when I see you,
Will you want to know me?

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  • Lj-
    August 29, 2008
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    Nice write.

    Thank you for your entry,
    Best of luck!