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Upon A Youth's Verse

As silk brushes upon tender skin
like the words that drift from soft fingertips.
A lovers kiss; drifting in bliss
sighs reveal the pleasure of metaphoric
undertaking from a heart treasured by many.

Young though full of intellectual musings
ears turn to the tune of rhythmic verses
woven into a beautiful poetic display.
As the music is played from the thoughts
of a youthful perception, inspired by hearts rhythm...

I make a bow to a humble poet,
a diamond in the rough.
Thank you very much for sharing
such beautiful talent here with us.

 

 

Now that I've said all I've needed to say,
I must go take a Tylenol because all
those big words made my head hurt
...

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Dedicated to me squishy Marty

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  • ecrivain01
    September 8, 2008
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    Cute ...

    nice job.


  • Dienush
    September 7, 2008

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    Aww this is so sweet and such nice things to say to him The last stanza was precious. Thanks for your entry.

    ~Diana


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    August 28, 2008

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    Awww, you have such a sweet pen.
    This was yummy like honey for him.


  • LadyDementia gold member
    August 28, 2008

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    Hehe love the ending A beautifully penned dedication. Gorgeous imagery portrayed here, very well penned hunni


  • Age of Rain
    August 28, 2008

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    'As silk brushes upon tender skin
    like the words that drift from soft fingertips.'

    That is beautiful and I love it. I can hardly believe you wrote it for me.

    'of a youthful perception, inspired by hearts rhythm...'

    I'm not THAT young...ok I am! *grins* 'hearts rhythm' is very pretty.

    LOL! at your ending! Thank you so very much for this!


    • Angelflower
      August 28, 2008
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      Lol. Your younger then me so your YOUNG!

      And I tried.. it's not the best, like I said. But I gave it a go ..

      My head always hurts after I use words bigger then, heartbeat or summer

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