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I saw myself
and turned my head
I heard a noise.

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  • poetryality silver member
    September 19, 2008

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    it was quiet
    then sound
    came out of nowhere

    "made you look"


    Great!


    Renee


  • SmartBrick
    August 27, 2008
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    What typeOf noise???Great job!


    • herrlurch
      September 4, 2008
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      (sorry for the hiatus)

      or in thunder
      or whisper
      a noise like between

      PS. It always takes some time to make up these terrific ideas *lol*

      • SmartBrick
        September 4, 2008
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        LOL!Yes!I bet it does!I didn't say, but I do like the mystery of the whole "I heard a noise" But it doesn't tell what the noise was!LIKE OMG! It could be ANYTHING! kinda creepy when i put it that way!