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Demon In Me

Scars on my wrist,
A selfish obsession.
Fury in my blood.
From this demon's posession.

My heart belongs to Darkness.
My life belongs to fear.
with every passing moment,
My friend, death is drawing near.

I live this life alone.
No one understands
This demon in my body
And all that she demands.

A cowboy's life may be lonely.,
But mine is even more.
No one knows this demon,
And what she has in store.

Darkness is my savior.
Solitude is my friend.
The border between good and evil
has begun to blend.

The world outside my world
moves about with glee.
All the while I continue to fight
the demon inside of me.

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  • Danzy007
    September 10, 2008
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    darksided Kali

    kool


  • Citizen Soldier
    September 1, 2008
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    Bravo!

    Very good!


  • Dancing Darling
    September 1, 2008
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    Woo hoo! Go Kali! Slay that demon, baby!

    *Ahem* Anywho....good write.


  • peregrin
    August 27, 2008

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    First reading through this,
    I was like
    "Just another poem"
    ...
    But that feeling changed.
    I reread this poem maybe 5 times,
    I like it,
    a lot.
    Very well written,
    and it is amazing.


  • XcupcakesX
    August 27, 2008

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    Wow i love this. It's amazing Kali. ^-^ *hugs you* you're a great writer. I wish i had half of your talent. ^-^

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