Endlessly waiting, hands clasped tight,
I watch the sun rise in the early dawn
forever wishing you a safe journey home to my arms.
Author notes
um yeah. Happy happy XD
A contest entry
- [{A contest for the lazy and/or bored!}] by SmartBrick.
330 points, ended September 20, 2008, 37 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This is an awesome poem. I like the imagery of a love coming home. It was full of such warmth. I really enjoyed the read!!!
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wow! holy smokes!! this was good!!!! hope u do well in the contest!!!!
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Lol... I adore the contest name.
I probably should have entered, seeing as how I am lazy AND bored half of the time. 
BUT I DIGRESS! This is beautiful, babes. ♥ Reminds me of, well, the life of a military spouse? LIKE, I could see some little old lady [ okay, maybe not OLD, but yeah ] sitting by herrrr... balcony window, and waiting for her husband to return from War. ^_^ I'm weird that way, heh'. -
this is short but it is sooo good! it's a change from your normal style of writing. i love it!!! hope u do well in that contest! XD
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happy is right!This poem made me happy!I like happy poems!
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Lovely write my dear....
Best wishes with this entry...
Many blessings
~A~
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