To feel your breath upon my cheek,
you wile and woo me in my dream.
My senses working ovetime,
can not believe how real it seems.
Drawn to a memory so beautiful,
obsession I would surely die for.
Dwell in sleepless nights forever,
searching dreams forever more.
How I long to have you lay beside,
body trembles at the thought of you.
No one could ever take your place,
no other lover will ever do.
Author notes
Verse Prompt... Bob Dylan
There's beauty in that silver singing river
There's beauty in that rainbow in the sky
But none of these, and nothing else can match the beauty
That I remember in my own true loves eyes
Yes and only if my own true love was waiting
If I could hear her heart a softly pounding
Yes and only if she was lying by me
The I'd lie in my bed, once again
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A contest entry
- This is a verse prompt. by Karl Weiss - Topaz.
1750 points, ended September 6, 2008, 10 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Enchanting!
This was a very beautiful poem that
felt quite magical. True love I think
feels like that. The images you evoked
in my mind was enthralling.
You have a lovely gift of expression
that is a pleasure to experience.
Nice job
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Wonderful
This would be unforgettable. Sweetly your words describe the feelings of your love, a softness of caring love. Thank you for sharing.
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Thank You Jules
Your comment is so appreciated dear friend. So glad you enjoyed reading. Hugs and Smiles for you. Have a lovely day
Bless You,
Sandy
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Oh this was a most touching piece, my my I was blown away and I can't say this happens often, for it does not. Beautiful! Thank you for your fine entry in this contest, and please feel free to enter my others.
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Thank you for the wonderful comment. You take care. Sandy
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